tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873049568142168874.post2614839737781276694..comments2022-04-10T07:33:25.878-07:00Comments on Aprende con María José : School Trip to Sierra Nevada Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07272228003738606973noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2873049568142168874.post-55352912545158795142016-06-20T14:26:57.582-07:002016-06-20T14:26:57.582-07:00Nice trip, Mª José.
Good post, just to make it a ...Nice trip, Mª José.<br /><br />Good post, just to make it a little better:<br />1. Make clear paragrpahs.<br />2. Keep the tense. In this case, you mix present and past. Can you check that?<br />3. Look: http://images.slideplayer.com/25/7646749/slides/slide_2.jpg <br />4. The lesson LASTS two hours - The trip TOOK 3 days. Can you find these little mistakes in your text?<br /><br />Thanks for your effort!auroracrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14781757068791427369noreply@blogger.com